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First of all, a lot of CSS is out of place.

First of all, a lot of CSS is out of place. It's not at all obvious what you do. You've used a lot of your biggest text to say that you're with us every step of the way, but what does that mean? It's really generic. Also, who are your targeting? What's the pain point that you're solving? What existing service are your replacing in my life? Also there are too many walls of text, and the fonts are too small. Edit: A huge amount of the page is taken up by a person's face. That's not conveying any sort of message, so it should be something blurrier or lower contrast or both. See http://teamtreehouse.com for an example of some of the things I've suggested.

Posted by smt88 on Feb 12, 2015, 11:08 AM

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First of all, a lot of CSS is out of place.

smt88Feb 12, 2015, 11:08 AM

First of all, a lot of CSS is out of place. It's not at all obvious what you do. You've used a lot of your biggest text to say that you're with us every step of the way, but what does that mean? It's really generic. Also, who are your targeting? What's the pain point that you're solving? What existing service are your replacing in my life? Also there are too many walls of text, and the fonts are too small. Edit: A huge amount of the page is taken up by a person's face. That's not conveying any sort of message, so it should be something blurrier or lower contrast or both. See http://teamtreehouse.com for an example of some of the things I've suggested.

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